haiku 1-4

she saw you today
heart dripping blood, scruffy hair
grey; ubiquitious

trees began to cry
petals, leaves; a brush with fate
never said goodnight

sweetness on her breath
we surpassed infinity
sunshine in her hair

this is a study
of not only my control
but of my release
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2 responses to “haiku 1-4

  1. Talented writer here.

    Life Is Ready 4 U at

    http://www.jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com

    Thank you for the excellence.

  2. if you were a fish, what kind of fish you want to be?

    I tried Haiku today,
    as yellowish as gold,
    I am a naughty little fish
    refusing to grow old

    let know know your response.

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